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Soccer Cleats!!
February 21, 2008, 4:34 am
Filed under: Travel and Sports

         Soccer has been a very important part of my life; to me, it has a clear definition: passion. It’s not only a very healthy hobby, or a good sport to watch and admire the extremely handsome soccer players; it’s something more, part of my culture, and part of who I am. Whenever I think of soccer, I think of parties, of celebrations, of dancing; and of course, what does a good dancer needs in order to have an amazing performance? Talent and of course, some darn good dancing shoes.      

    A soccer player needs to have three things to be successful: Talent, strength and speed. Talent acquired with time, practice and effort; strength to defeat the opponent on the field; and speed to be the first and fastest of the team. Talent and strength are pretty much, gained with experience; but, what about speed?    

   A soccer player, or at least a very good one, knows that speed is primordial and accuracy, even more. That being said, the secret of soccer players and their success in speed and accuracy comes down to a simple pair of cleats. Cleats offer stability and support to the player; soccer cleats, in this case, are designed to keep the feet as close to the ground as possible.   

   Nike Mercurial SL; that is the name of the most popular and expensive soccer cleat as of right now. Nike, the producer, created the lightest and fastest soccer cleat in history of soccer. The Nike Mercurial SL weights only 0.418878 lb and is made of carbon fiber. Even though the cleat is light, strength and speed are well achieved by the player wearing it. The cleat has a good combination of colors, black and pink, designed especially for the modern soccer player. The construction of the Nike Mercurial SL gives the player the propulsion and acceleration he needs to make smooth moves but also the protection of avoiding foot injuries.      

    I think that the cleat is the most important part of the soccer attire. The cleat needs to be right for you and your needs; there are millions of models, colors and styles. I love the Nike Mercurial SL not only because of its aerodynamics or popularity, but because my favorite soccer player, Cristiano Ronaldo, is an avid fan and always wear them when he plays. Ronaldo is very successful on the field, his goals and tricks are extraordinary and he has said before that without his cleats, he probably wouldn’t be able to do half of the wonders he does while playing.      

    Most of the people have some kind of activity that they embrace, love and enjoy above everything else. I know that they can relate to me and my soccer madness and not only those who find soccer appealing; but those who have something they care about and make them who they are; it might be drawing, writing, reading, composing, cooking, cleaning etc. Loving something that builds character in you and makes you better as a person is essential to develop a happier personality.      

    Convincing someone that the right tools drive you to success is not a goal easy to accomplish. Even though I want to inform and let everybody know the benefits of having an amazing over-the-top cleat; the main purpose is to share a little bit of my knowledge on the subject I define as my passion.     

    Readers everywhere might be wondering why this girl cares so much about soccer. She doesn’t even play! And if she does I bet she is terrible! And you know what that is true. After reading this, you soccer fanatic who is still in the “closet,” you discouraged but talented musician, you aspiring writer; please have in mind that no matter how hard obstacles are on the way with effort and the right tools, like the soccer cleat, everything is possible and impossible is nothing.


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I have been playing soccer since I was 7, and I don’t really think that the cleat is all that important, but I REALLY want that shoe!! It would take some time to get used to the lightness, I am sure, but ligh soccer shoes sound amazing!
I have been playing soccer so long that I had almost forgotten how great it is… It was actually just recently I remembered how much I love it! Yes, lightness will add speed and speed is very important during a game! Always have to be first to the ball is you wanna win!

Comment by Tierza-kun

I finally fixed my blog!! so I hope you all can understand me better haha!
thanks for reading and for the suggestions!

-Odette

Comment by odettesalazar

Visually this blog is fine. It isn’t too long and therefore i’m inclined to read the rest of it.

the tone is friendly and doesn’t assume I know more than I do.

the hook is good and makes me want to find out more about what soccer has to do with you.

The organization is better since I last read it. I would just like to know more about what the cleat actually looks like, since you describe more about its abilities.

Your transitions work well because your paragraphs connect with each other.

Word choice is varied and no use of I chose or whatnot.

the only advice I can offer is if in the fourth paragraph it should say “foot injuries” or “feet injuries”…i don’t know, just sounds weird.

Comment by jeremyadkins

Visualy the blog is fine, although it does not have any photos, it is consistent with the font and structure. Your tone is very informative. I knew exactly what the paper was going to be about as soon as i read the intial hook, which transitoned well into the rest of the paper.

Comment by jdorce1

Visual- I enjoy how it is short, because if it is was long it would bore me, also it is very accurate and to the point. Nice!

Tone/Voice- The tone of the article is very enthusiastic, that the soccer cleats are the best and very light. It shows excitement.

The hook- The hook is nice, it allows us readers to know how u relate to soccer.

Organization- Yes organization is good, however describe the cleat, if not portray a picture, and talk about the previous versions as well. (maybe)

Transition-good

Word Choice- Appealing

Grammar- The grammar is fine, just use words to describe the texture of the shoe, such as the cushioning of the leather, and etc…. WELL DONE.

I love the cleats i wear them now!

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